Is this an original piece? I'd really like to know, its nice!
Is this an original piece? I'd really like to know, its nice!
Yes, it is original. : ) Thank you.
I wish only that I could make enough games that I had a use for a song this amazing and jazzy. I must say I am in love with this piece.
Your kind words encourage me to make more music and my music encourages you to make more great games. We artists feed each other's creativity! :D
I'm ecstatic that you loved the music! Thank you very much for the kind words and hopefully at some point in the future we'll see this in your next wonderful gaming masterpiece!
I wish more people gave feedback! I believe the feedback process can be so rewarding.
I like it a lot! Before listening to this I heard your first version of this song, I enjoyed it too but its the change of instruments that really blew my mind.
6/5 Stars
Glad you like it, but this is a really (and I mean REALLY) old piece... feel free to check out some more recent stuff.
I don't even think you need to expand on this one. To be honest what I think you need is an awesome video game to make some music for! Such a smooth loop it is mind blowing. Very sci-fi load screeny style. I'm curious as to your inspiration, these are all fantastic songs!
Such an awesome industrial style video game song. I'm a big fan of your style!
Cant wait to see the expansion. This is awesome!
I am in love with this. The use of old school game effects with a consistent beat and melody is hypnotizing. This makes me very reminiscent of being creeped out by old video games(in a good way). I like this song and its style a lot, and think you performed greatly!
Very good thought provoking parts, I really like the song as a whole! In my opinion the more intense parts of the song detract from it. To me they feel sloppy compared to the other nice melodies in this track, almost inconsistent! I like that you don't really keep a consistent time signature, but I feel that at the same time it would make it sound more professional. I hope this is some good feedback, I really enjoy your music.
Thank you for the constructive criticism! Lately I've been working on making more professional-type music, since more often than not my "songs" are just mostly-improvised jams.
After listening to it again, I guess the intense parts make it more obvious that this is a jam rather than a song, and that does take away from the overall mood of the piece. Expect some more consistent (though still very emotional, haha) music in the near future! Thanks again for the feedback!
Quite a nice guitar piece! I certainly agree with Krichotomy that this would be nice in a game! The digital phone effect around 3:20 made me curious aha
Thank you very much! Feel free to use it at any time or recommend it to some fellow game designers; just let me know beforehand! :P
And ahh yes, the phone effect...which I used on purpose... :P
I feel this song fits perfectly with the description. Very awesome peaceful song. I hope one day you are graced with your own sound proof room for some quality recording!
Thank you, I'm very happy you liked the song and the bit of poetry that went with it :) My dream is to someday have a recording studio (perhaps a record deal as well) of my own!
I am an aspiring Game designer looking to make a name for myself. I aim to dazzle with my well put together game design, not with my animations. I hope to provide entertainment for gamers on the internet, and one day have a job creating games.
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